Coordinating Conjunctions in English: And, But and Yet

Coordinating Conjunctions in English: And, But and Yet

Mar 14, 2025Rene Tetzner

Summary

And, but, and yet are tiny words that shape big logic. In scholarly prose, and adds and sequences ideas; but marks clear contrast; yet signals a sharper twist—surprise despite expectation. Use them to coordinate equal grammatical units (words, phrases, clauses), maintain parallel structure, and guide readers through argument moves without bloat.

Editing rules in brief: join two independent clauses with a comma + conjunction; omit the comma when the second unit is not a full clause; keep coordinated items grammatically parallel; avoid stringing endless clauses; prefer yet when you want “even so” energy. Place coordinators mid-sentence in formal writing; initial position is possible but best used sparingly and purposefully.

Pitfalls to avoid: comma splices, non-parallel lists, vague reversals (“but” with no real contrast), ambiguous scope of coordination, and overuse that dulls emphasis. Fix with precise contrasts, tighter wording, and strategic alternatives (subordination, semicolons, dashes, colon logic).

Bottom line: treat and/but/yet as precise tools—balance your clauses, show the right relation, and your methods, results, and discussion will read cleaner, faster, and more persuasive.

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Coordinating Conjunctions in English for Scholars: And, But, and Yet

Seven coordinating conjunctions—for, and, nor, but, or, yet, so—coordinate equal grammatical units. This article focuses on the three you will use most in academic writing: and, but, and yet. We’ll define their core logic, show punctuation and parallelism rules, and offer edit-ready examples for abstracts, methods, results, and discussions.


1) Coordination 101: What These Words Do

Coordinating means joining like with like—word with word, phrase with phrase, clause with clause—while giving equal syntactic weight to each side. In scholarly prose, coordination is how you stack evidence, qualify claims, and pace your argument without burying readers in subordination.

Conjunction Core relation Use in scholarly prose
and addition / sequence accumulate evidence, chain steps, indicate consequence when context already implies it
but contrast / exception counterbalance limitations, caveats, unexpected results
yet concessive twist (“even so”) heighten contrast where the second clause defies expectation

2) And: Addition, Sequence, and Tight Lists

Function. And adds items or steps and can join two independent clauses to form a compound sentence.

Clauses: “We preregistered the analysis, and we shared the code.”
One subject, compound predicate: “We preregistered the analysis and shared the code.” (no comma)

2.1 Comma logic with and

  • Clause + clause: use a comma before and if both sides are independent clauses (“S V …, and S V …”).
  • Shared subject: no comma if the second half is not an independent clause (“S V and V …”).
  • Lists: use the Oxford comma in formal prose to avoid ambiguity: “A, B, and C.”
Ambiguity fix: “We recruited clinicians, educators, and policymakers.” (Without the Oxford comma, “educators and policymakers” could be misread as a unit.)

2.2 Parallel structure with and

Match grammatical form on both sides to reduce cognitive load.

Parallel: “to estimate incidence and to evaluate predictors.”
Non-parallel: “to estimate incidence and evaluation of predictors.”

2.3 Polysyndeton vs. asyndeton

Stylistic choices matter. Polysyndeton (repeating and in a list) slows rhythm for emphasis; asyndeton (omitting the final and) feels clipped. In formal research writing, prefer standard coordination with an Oxford comma unless you want a specific rhetorical effect.

“We audited recruitment, randomisation, follow-up, and analysis.”

3) But: Clear Contrast and Honest Caveats

Function. But introduces a contrast or exception. It is your default coordinator for “however” in clause form.

Results: “Performance improved overall, but calibration worsened in minority classes.”
Discussion: “The effect is promising, but the sample was underpowered for subgroup C.”

3.1 Punctuation with but

  • Join two independent clauses with a comma + but.
  • Do not add a comma when but links a single subject to two predicates.
  • When but means “except,” no comma: “We could do nothing but wait.”

3.2 Make the contrast real

Readers tire of “but” that merely repeats or hedges. The second clause should push against the expectation set by the first.

Weak: “The model performed well, but it was not perfect.” (banal)
Strong: “The model performed well, but its gains vanished on out-of-domain data.”

3.3 “Not only … but (also) …”

A powerful correlative pair that demands parallelism.

Not only did preregistration reduce outcome switching, but it also increased reviewer confidence.”

4) Yet: The Concessive Turn (“Even So”)

Function. Yet conveys a stronger concessive twist than but. It says, in effect, “despite what you might predict, something else happened.”

Concession: “Sampling was limited, yet the effect replicated across sites.”
Style: “He is meticulous, yet his drafts contain basic citation errors.”

4.1 When to prefer yet over but

  • When expectation is explicitly overturned (“even though…” energy).
  • When you want compactness without a full subordinate clause (although/though).

4.2 Punctuation with yet

As with but, use a comma for two independent clauses; omit it when the second unit is not a full clause.


5) Formal Placement: Mid-Sentence Is Default

In formal academic writing, coordinators most naturally sit inside sentences to join equals. Beginning a sentence with And, But, or Yet is increasingly acceptable, but overuse looks conversational and can irritate reviewers. Use initial position sparingly for emphasis or flow.

Occasional initial for pivot:Yet the subgroup analysis tells a different story.”
Overuse:And we next report… But then we… And finally we…” (fatigue)

6) Punctuation Rules You Can Apply Immediately

Pattern Rule Example
Clause, and/but/yet clause Comma required “The protocol changed, and attrition fell.”
Subject V and/but/yet V … No comma “The team designed and validated the assay.”
Series A, B, and C Prefer Oxford comma “training, testing, and deployment”
Exception (but = except) No comma “We could do nothing but wait.”

7) Parallelism: Coordination’s Golden Rule

Coordination implies equality, so match the grammar on both sides. Parallelism clarifies comparisons, lists of aims, and paired evidence.

Aims (parallel infinitives): “to quantify bias, to evaluate mitigation, and to assess generalisability.”
Mixed forms: “to quantify bias, evaluation of mitigation, and to assess…”

8) Meaningful Alternatives to Avoid Over-coordination

Sometimes coordination isn’t the clearest option. Consider:

  • Subordination (although, because, while) when one idea depends on the other.
  • Semicolon to join related clauses when no coordinator fits.
  • Em dash to mark an aside or sharp pivot (use sparingly in formal prose).
  • Colon to introduce a consequence, definition, or list after a complete clause.
“The dataset was imbalanced; calibration therefore became our primary metric.”

9) Common Pitfalls (and Fast Repairs)

  1. Comma splice: “The model converged, the results were unstable.” → Add but/yet, use a semicolon, or split: “The model converged, yet the results were unstable.”
  2. Vague reversal: “It improved, but there were issues.” → Name the issue: “It improved, but calibration degraded on rare classes.”
  3. Run-on coordination: five clauses chained with and. → Break into sentences; use subordination or bullets for steps.
  4. Non-parallel lists: “collect data, cleaning, and analysed.” → “collect, clean, and analyse.”
  5. Ambiguous scope: “We analysed A and B and C in Study 2.” → Clarify grouping: “We analysed A and B, and in Study 2 we analysed C.”

10) Discipline-Specific Patterns

  • Abstracts: Prefer concise coordination: “We tested X and Y, but only X replicated.” Avoid conversational openings with initial And/But.
  • Methods: Chain steps with and only when they’re sequential actions of the same subject; otherwise use subheadings or bullets.
  • Results: Use but or yet to report exceptions succinctly: “Accuracy increased, yet latency doubled.”
  • Discussion: “Not only … but also …” is effective for contributions paired with implications.

11) Before → After: Edit-Ready Examples

1) Methods (over-coordination)
Before: We recorded temperatures and we calculated means and we generated plots and we checked outliers.
After: We recorded temperatures, calculated means, generated plots, and checked outliers.

2) Results (weak contrast)
Before: The classifier was accurate, but there were issues.
After: The classifier was accurate, but calibration on rare classes remained poor (ECE 7.8%).

3) Discussion (flat narrative)
Before: The study was small and we found moderate effects and we think this is promising.
After: The study was small, yet the effects were consistent across sites; but replication in a larger cohort is essential.

12) Quick Reference Table

Goal Best choice Example
Add a peer point or step and (+ parallel structure) “We measured cortisol and assessed mood.”
Mark plain contrast but “Precision increased, but recall fell.”
Mark “despite” twist yet “Calibration improved, yet fairness gaps persisted.”
Pair contributions not only … but (also) … “Not only efficiency increased, but accuracy also rose.”
Join two full clauses comma + coordinator “N rose, and power increased.”

13) Practice: Choose and Fix

  1. We expanded recruitment, ___ the subgroup remained underpowered.
  2. The intervention reduced errors ___ increased completion time.
  3. The algorithm was trained on balanced data, ___ it failed on real-world logs.
  4. We used the open dataset ___ the private hospital registry.
  5. Not only did we pre-register, ___ we ___ shared the code.

Suggested answers

  1. yet (concessive twist)
  2. but (plain contrast) or “and” if both are intended consequences (prefer to clarify)
  3. yet (expectation violated)
  4. and (addition) — if exclusive choice, use “or”
  5. butalso (“Not only … but also …”)

14) A Mini Workflow for Your Next Draft

  1. Underline every and/but/yet. Ask what relation you intend (addition, contrast, concession). Replace if the word does not match the logic.
  2. Test parallelism. For each coordination, align grammatical form (verb with verb, noun with noun, clause with clause).
  3. Check commas. If both sides are independent clauses, you need a comma. If not, you likely don’t.
  4. Trim chains. Break long and chains into sentences; convert some links to subordination.
  5. Reserve starts. Use sentence-initial And/But/Yet sparingly for clear rhetorical pivots.

15) Conclusion: Small Connectors, Strong Control

In the tight economy of academic writing, and, but, and yet do the quiet work of logic. They control the pace of methods, sharpen contrasts in results, and frame concessions in discussions. When you match each coordinator to its true relation, punctuate correctly, and enforce parallelism, your argument reads inevitable—not accidental. That’s the difference readers, reviewers, and editors notice.

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